This poem, originally written in 2004, as part of a short series about natural disasters, is submitted here in response to this week’s poetry rehab prompt https://wordpress.com/read/post/feed/31982590/851909184
Hymn to Neptune
The sea sucks at the edges of the earth
& we at it with our fish-hooks and nets.
*
Mother Nature responds better,
if you treat Her like a lady.
Even so, you still can’t be sure
She won’t throw
one of Her turns or moods
or a cup around from time to time.
Likewise Father Sea.
*
You can never quite tell when the Old Man
is going to whip his belt off,
(when He’s had a skin full)
&, (for no damned good reason)
treat you to the hiding of a lifetime.
Most of the time, He’s harmless, though.
Snoring & wheezing through his grizzled
waves of beard. His bad, tar-choked chest
going up and down
like a baby’s, flaked out on the sofa-bed.
Bored on the dole
or knackered by a hard day working for the Council.
That cough.
*
Sometimes He brings home battered fish for supper
on Friday nights,
oozing its grease through sheets
of last week’s Sun.
Diesel oil on His clothes.
&, generally, all goes well,
if you treat Him
to bottles of lite ale & with kid gloves.
*
Give or take the odd night or two
When He’s off his head.
Something to do with Mum.
Recife, 26 December 2004
Oh.Wow. Painful. And familiar to millions. Perhaps.
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