[Section 2 of 200, entitled Witness, kicks off the narrative proper and introduces the poem’s second overarching theme of ‘witnessing’ and ‘evidence’ and the ways in which these mesh with the fuzzy boundary between truth and falsity. This will clash throughout the poem with the theme of mathematical discipline and mental arithmetic introduced in the Prologue. Despite the inherent difficulty of the themes addressed, I am trying to keep each section short, sharp and vernacular. Fictitious and semi-fictitious characters appear fleetingly, stereotypically and with cartoonish superficiality, as is usual in my current work. I have no interest whatsoever in creating a simulacrum of psychological ‘depth’ or a ‘documentary’ of ‘reality’. In my view, no such things exist.]
200 Section 2 Witness
The afternoon sun
is already declining
in the chilly white sky
behind the steeple,
as Jeb and Gem watch
Yu and the General stagger
out of the pub at chucking-
out time and chuck up
their ploughman’s lunch
into the bin outside the cathedral.
“Look at the state
of those two,” Jeb exclaims,
looking at his watch. “And it’s
only just gone three.” “And he’s
old enough to be her grandfather,” Gem
adds, “Yuk!”, as Jeb hurries
her away from the ugly scene.
[…] Section 2 – Witness […]