This latest attempt at a poem, yet again produced and submitted in response to Andy Townend/Mara Eastern’s Poetry Rehab prompt https://wordpress.com/read/post/feed/31982590/833537613 fits in to my recent series of poems on urban issues, which have become, ironically, a more intensive concern, now I am virtually house-bound and see the city growing menacingly around me only through a small window.
Wind Eye
The old Norsemen tell us that a window
is originally little more than a breeze-block
letting in the draught
to clear the hut of smoke,
air it of damp.
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Glass promised everything:
visions of the furthest galaxies,
the tiniest lactobacilli;
a framed view out onto a nice landscaped garden;
soaring curtain walls mirroring heaven and sky;
underwater flora;
a probe into the very soul.
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But looking up out now
through the mashrabiya
of security bars and safety netting
at the tall apartment buildings
that obscure the moon,
each flat marked by the dripping backside
of an air-conditioning unit sticking out,
as the all-year-round fairy lights
of HD TVs and laptops
twinkle behind blinds,
there is a feeling
not of light refracted
but of darkness falling
and wonder
at what we have made of the world.
Time travelled, through rose tinted glass or not, a very moving poem.
As always an intellectual feast and very moving…
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