This dark poem, submitted in response to this week’s Poetry Rehab prompt, Place, https://wordpress.com/read/post/feed/31982590/900236150 , is about the river that runs through the small town in which I was born. It is set in the aspic of my dimming memories of a small English community blighted by industrial decay in the early 1980s, and may be somewhat lacking in geographical accuracy, but could easily still apply, sadly, to any such post-industrial town anywhere in the world today.
The River Biss
They call it Biss.
As if there were some joke in there
about never being able to step into it twice
or the L having long since fallen out.
Paradise lost.
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Biss runs between concrete banks
along a concrete bed
around the Gateway Supermarket,
a car park, and the old cotton mill
no-one has bothered to pull down.
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And you can
follow it along the concrete riverwalk
interspersed with newly planted trees
up or down stream.
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Down to the run-down factory and the park
to ply the ducks with crumbs
or steer a toy boat about
with a remote control on the stagnant pond
or pay respect to the bird-crap wreathed
copper monument to the war dead,
worn greenish blue by acid rain,
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Or upstream to the railway station
to catch your train out of town,
to the tune of pigs led to slaughter
and the smell of pork pies
wafting from the butcher’s shop nearby.
*
Biss runs through the blood
& it’s no wonder a punk girl now & then
harms herself with a razor-blade
to let the poison out.
It’s no wonder the streets are littered
with bodies, heads in plastic bags,
amidst discarded tubes of glue.
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Attachment
needs a super-strong adhesive these days,
and lies only a spot of shoplifting,
a shady DIY shop counter,
or a dealer’s cool leather jacket pocket
away…
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A church squashed between shops
is clogged with zonked out punks.
Cripples hobble hopeless and homeless
through pedestrianized zones.
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‘There we all go,’ we think,
‘but for God’s grace, perhaps,
or a giro from the DWP.’
I have seen fragments of this. Worse than anger or resentment, the emptiness.
I love this, especially as I was born in an old cotton mill town in the North of England, I can still smell the river that enclosed my first school….
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