This poem, originally written in 2000, is submitted in response to this week’s Poetry Rehab prompt http://andytownend.com/2016/01/25/poetry-101-rehab-evening/
Sunday Evening
Vast congregations
of rooks
loop in the dusk
and settle
on electricity
cables; agitated
by approaching sleep.
The sky is pink and yellow.
Rays slant
through gaps in clouds,
as if angels
would tumble
readily out of them still
onto our manicured
& post-industrial land.
If we wished
or willed.
The church bells
have already rung
emptily for the few
who fill them
& the fewer who care.
We drive home,
for tea and TV.
I watch a kids’ cartoon
about the original sin,
as my poached egg
slithers out
onto toasted bread
& oozes yolk.
And I cannot tell
why I see in it
all the ugliness
of the strange fruit
Adam ate,
as I will.
This is like a great extended haiku!
A very clever poem. Again.
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